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Post by hackney on May 13, 2014 11:22:16 GMT
Hi all, I'm new to this and so I would like you to criticize the hell out of my 'first build' so I can make my site more worthy of your software. Thank you in advance for your time & comments. www.johnnydean.co.uk |
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Post by doxe666 on May 18, 2014 21:42:46 GMT
Couple of things I would say and this is personal preference. 1) The border around the boxes in the Iframe I feel are to thick. Also they do not blend correctly as there is a corner that has a bevel on it so 2 corners do not meet. 2)Your header is to wide if it was thinner there would be no need for the scroll bar. 3) Your contact info that is within the header seems all over the place. I would put all the details in a contact us page or have them neatly in a single line. This in turn would also make your header thinner. 4) Not sure about the colours or the 2 stars in the header as they do not blend with the header and you can see the boxes. 5)Do not like the way the text on the buttons magnifies with the rollover as the last few are a tight squeeze. 6)I would get rid of the reflection on the buttons as it does not look right. 7) Not sure if the scrolling text is really required. That's just my opinion and I mean no offense  Doxe |
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Post by hackney on May 20, 2014 8:56:00 GMT
Thank you for your comments. I take no offence and I have taken them on board. I'm at present working on a complete new site including colours and sizes of header etc. I will post again when new site is up and running.
Thanks again |
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Post by hackney on May 22, 2014 11:17:43 GMT
New site now up & running, Changed colours, buttons, scrolling text + some small tweeks. Major change on T&C's link, added link to a pdf pop up to keep form details from having to be re-entered if T&C's were read during form fill out. Do I still need T&C Button/Page? Please make any comments to help this site be better received. www.johnnydean.co.uk Thank you in advanced. |
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Post by Frank on May 22, 2014 11:33:23 GMT
I'm thinking out load...maybe you could have the submit button hidden until they accept the T&C? I think I remember graham having a script like that not sure...or maybe you could have the submit button covered with a 80% white panel (make it look grayed out)then when some body clicks a "I accept" button it removes the panel?
Just thinking out loud.
I like this design more... cleaner.
moments later: I just tried it.. by adding a panel the same color as the background over the submit button.
made a small button with words beside it that said I accept:..
added an event to the button to hidden the panel over the submit button when clicked...
Seems to work ok.
Frank
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Post by Frank on May 22, 2014 11:50:10 GMT
Another idea:
I'm thinking you might need a booking link in the navigation (easy to find)
when clicked it shows you the T&C layer (over the form) at the bottom of the T&C you have a big "I accept" button that when clicked the T&C disappears showing the form.
..meaning they have to accept the T&C to proceed to the form.
Just ideas both could be done easily with events hide and show.
Frank
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Post by Graham on May 22, 2014 12:01:46 GMT
I got a terms and conditions script that won't let you click submit until box ticked
Sent from my SM-N9005 using proboards
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Post by Frank on May 22, 2014 18:04:35 GMT
I just sent you an IM..
Frank
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Post by hackney on May 23, 2014 8:32:06 GMT
Thanks Frank/Graham. I will try and see if I can do the above ideas. Graham, how do I go about getting condition script? IM me please. Frank I just sent you an IM. Cheers guys.
John
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Post by hackney on May 23, 2014 18:48:14 GMT
Hi frank,
"by adding a panel the same colour as the background over the submit button.
made a small button with words beside it that said I accept:..
added an event to the button to hidden the panel over the submit button when clicked..."
Sorry I've only managed to create the pane & button but don't know how to add an event or how to make it.
can you help please
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